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synthneon2023-11-08 02:57 pm
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oceanview || ❝ the nightmares finally over, now i'm wide awake. ❞
OCEANVIEW
i was trapped in a thousand nights with no escape.
🔦 RETURN — DRAFT 1
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wake's edit notes to myself
CHAPTER I —
SCENE I (MEETING, FBC MONITORING SITE) - FADEN MEETS WAKE
- POLARIS REACTS TO LIGHT (?? why?)
- CONNECTION BETWEEN FADEN AND WAKE (should i stop it?)
SCENE I (MEETING, FBC MONITORING SITE) - FADEN MEETS WAKE
- POLARIS REACTS TO LIGHT (?? why?)
- CONNECTION BETWEEN FADEN AND WAKE (should i stop it?)
CHAPTER ?? — SCENE ?? (OH DEER DINER, END)
- WAKE AND SEVASTOPOL SEPARATED FROM FADEN
- SCRATCH FINDS FADEN
- SCRATCH KILLED FADEN
-sCraTcH kilLED HER. NO, IT'S WRONG
- WRONG, WRONG, CHANGE THE PLOT.
- RESET
- SCRATCH FINDS FADEN
- SCRATCH KILLED FADEN
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- WRONG, WRONG, CHANGE THE PLOT.
- RESET
🔦 RETURN — DRAFT ?? HOW MANY I LOST COUNT
chapter // scene
wake's edit notes to myself
CHAPTER I —
SCENE I (CABIN, MEETING)
SCENE II (OH DEER DINER, END) - FADEN MEETS WAKE
- WAKE NOT LUCIDENOUGH
- BREAKFAST AT OH DEER DINER
- FADEN REMEMBERS (no, she shouldn't WHY IS SHE)
- SCRATCH FINDS THE HEROES
- RESET ITReSET IT NOW
SCENE I (CABIN, MEETING)
SCENE II (OH DEER DINER, END) - FADEN MEETS WAKE
- WAKE NOT LUCID
- BREAKFAST AT OH DEER DINER
- FADEN REMEMBERS (no, she shouldn't WHY IS SHE)
- SCRATCH FINDS THE HEROES
- RESET IT
𖦹 INITIATION — I
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I NEED TO CONTACT JESSE
- LOOPING STILL, HAVEN'T FOUND THE ENDING
- WILL SHE LISTEN? ( what if she doesn't )
- WILL SHE LISTEN? ( what if she doesn't )
🔦 RETURN — DRAFT 51 HOW MANY DO I NEED TO FIX IT?
chapter // scene
wake's edit notes to myself
CHAPTER I —
SCENE I (MEETING, CABIN)
SCENE II (ENDING, FBC MONITORING SITE) - FBI HAS WAKE
- FADEN MEETS WAKE
- WAKE NOT LUCIDnot nearly enough--drowning, i'm drowning
- FADEN RECEIVES MESSAGE FROM WAKE
- FBI AND FBC PART WAYS (no, that's not right)
- SCRATCH FINDS THE FBC
- NO SURVIVORS
she's dead again she's DEAD AGAIN, AGAIN, IT'S MY FAULT
SCENE I (MEETING, CABIN)
SCENE II (ENDING, FBC MONITORING SITE) - FBI HAS WAKE
- FADEN MEETS WAKE
- WAKE NOT LUCID
- FADEN RECEIVES MESSAGE FROM WAKE
- FBI AND FBC PART WAYS (no, that's not right)
- SCRATCH FINDS THE FBC
- NO SURVIVORS
🔦 RETURN — DRAFT 64 IT DOESN'T END IT SPIRALS
chapter // scene
wake's edit notes to myself
CHAPTER I —
SCENE I (MEETING, OH DEER DINER, ENDING) - FBI TAKES WAKE TO BREAKFAST
- FADEN MEETS WAKE
- FADEN REMEMBERS (how, Polaris?? is that the key??)
- WAKE WAKES UP
- DEPARTURE, INITIATION, RETURN ( thats it that's IT)
- SCRATCH FINDS US AGAIN
SCENE I (MEETING, OH DEER DINER, ENDING) - FBI TAKES WAKE TO BREAKFAST
- FADEN MEETS WAKE
- FADEN REMEMBERS (how, Polaris?? is that the key??)
- WAKE WAKES UP
- DEPARTURE, INITIATION, RETURN ( thats it that's IT)
- SCRATCH FINDS US AGAIN
𖦹 INITIATION — II
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GROUND CONTROL TO MAJOR TOM
HOME IN NEW YORK... I WISH - LOOPING STILL, HAVEN'T FOUND THE ENDING
- THE OTHER PAYPHONE RINGS (?? it's jesse)
- TIM'S IN THE OCEANVIEW HOTEL
- DR DARLING THE SCIENCE MAN (??? who the hell is that?)
- THE OCEANVIEW MOTEL? JESSE WAITING THERE
- PROMISE TO WRITE US BACK IN
(you better fucking remember THAT. don't FORGET US. you PROMISED HER.)
- JESSE CAN CONTROL HER DREAMSCAPE?
- JESSE'S APARTMENT IN NYC (<--that's important!! somehow, why?)
HOME IN NEW YORK... I WISH - LOOPING STILL, HAVEN'T FOUND THE ENDING
- THE OTHER PAYPHONE RINGS (?? it's jesse)
- TIM'S IN THE OCEANVIEW HOTEL
- DR DARLING THE SCIENCE MAN (??? who the hell is that?)
- THE OCEANVIEW MOTEL? JESSE WAITING THERE
- PROMISE TO WRITE US BACK IN
(you better fucking remember THAT. don't FORGET US. you PROMISED HER.)
- JESSE CAN CONTROL HER DREAMSCAPE?
- JESSE'S APARTMENT IN NYC (<--that's important!! somehow, why?)
🔦 RETURN — DRAFT ??????????????? make it stop i just want to sleep
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wake's edit notes to myself
CHAPTER I —
SCENE I (MEETING REUNION, SHERIFF STATION)
SCENE II (SAGA COMES TO THE STATION)
SCENE III (SAGA AND FADEN TALK) - FBC TAKEN OVER THE SHERIFF STATION, WAKE IN CUSTODY
- FADEN AND WAKE REUNITE (we both remember I PROMISED)
- POLARIS CLAIMS THE STATION FROM THE DARK PRESENCE
- SAGA COMES TO THE STATION IN THE MORNING
- SAGA TRIES TO GET ANSWERS
- THE BOARD INTERVENES ( who the hell is the board? )
- SEVASTOPOL SAVES SAGA
- WAKE AND FADEN MOVED TO MOTEL
- SAGA AND FADEN HAVE A PROPER MEETING
SCENE I (
SCENE II (SAGA COMES TO THE STATION)
SCENE III (SAGA AND FADEN TALK) - FBC TAKEN OVER THE SHERIFF STATION, WAKE IN CUSTODY
- FADEN AND WAKE REUNITE (we both remember I PROMISED)
- POLARIS CLAIMS THE STATION FROM THE DARK PRESENCE
- SAGA COMES TO THE STATION IN THE MORNING
- SAGA TRIES TO GET ANSWERS
- THE BOARD INTERVENES ( who the hell is the board? )
- SEVASTOPOL SAVES SAGA
- WAKE AND FADEN MOVED TO MOTEL
- SAGA AND FADEN HAVE A PROPER MEETING
𖦹 INITIATION — III
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LATE NIGHT REDUX
- LOOPING, LOOPING ( i'm so tired )
- TIM'S IN THE OCEANVIEW HOTEL ( again? still? )
- DOOR HAS A NEW GUEST: FADEN
- TIM'S IN THE OCEANVIEW HOTEL ( again? still? )
- DOOR HAS A NEW GUEST: FADEN
IN BETWEEN WITH MR. DOOR ( SPECIAL GUEST I )
IN BETWEEN WITH MR. DOOR ( SPECIAL GUEST II )
IN BETWEEN WITH MR. DOOR ( SPECIAL GUEST III ) - FADEN MEETS MR. DOOR
- INITIATION AND RETURN
- FADEN ESCAPES THANKS TO AHTI
IN BETWEEN WITH MR. DOOR ( SPECIAL GUEST II )
IN BETWEEN WITH MR. DOOR ( SPECIAL GUEST III ) - FADEN MEETS MR. DOOR
- INITIATION AND RETURN
- FADEN ESCAPES THANKS TO AHTI
MESSAGES (TOP LEVEL)
LOST -LOST, LOST THE PLOT, THE GUIDING STAR.
- FADEN AND POLARIS REACH WAKE
- TIM ARRIVES
LOST -
- FADEN AND POLARIS REACH WAKE
- TIM ARRIVES
🔦 RETURN — ALAN WAKE II (60+) IS THIS THE LAST ONE?
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wake's edit notes to myself
CHAPTER I —
SCENE I ( REUNION, SHERIFF STATION)
SCENE II ( MORNING AFTER ATTACK)
- FBC TAKEN OVER THE SHERIFF STATION, WAKE IN CUSTODY
- FADEN AND WAKE REUNITE (she helped me remember AGAIN, was that in the story?)
- REGROUPING AFTER THE FIRST NIGHT
SCENE I ( REUNION, SHERIFF STATION)
SCENE II ( MORNING AFTER ATTACK)
- FBC TAKEN OVER THE SHERIFF STATION, WAKE IN CUSTODY
- FADEN AND WAKE REUNITE (she helped me remember AGAIN, was that in the story?)
- REGROUPING AFTER THE FIRST NIGHT
𖦹 INITIATION — IV
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ROOM 665
- MEETING ZANE AGAIN
- A WOMAN IN THE MOTEL, JESSE?
- TIM'S STILL HERE
- A WOMAN IN THE MOTEL, JESSE?
- TIM'S STILL HERE
🔦 RETURN — DRAFT 60+ PLEASE, LET IT BE THE LAST
chapter // scene
wake's edit notes to myself
CHAPTER I —
SCENE I ( REUNION, SHERIFF STATION)
SCENE II ( MORNING AFTER ATTACK)
- FBC TAKEN OVER THE SHERIFF STATION, WAKE IN CUSTODY
- REMEMBERING AGAIN, ATTACKED AGAIN
- SCRATCH COMES IN THE EVENING
SCENE I ( REUNION, SHERIFF STATION)
SCENE II ( MORNING AFTER ATTACK)
- FBC TAKEN OVER THE SHERIFF STATION, WAKE IN CUSTODY
- REMEMBERING AGAIN, ATTACKED AGAIN
- SCRATCH COMES IN THE EVENING
𖦹 INITIATION — V FINAL DRAFT
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wake's manuscript notes
INITIATION 9: GONE
- ALICE REACHES OUT TO FADEN
- FADEN CONTACTS WAKEtwo of us?
- FADEN CONTACTS WAKE
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